Not Me...

by Void   Mar 26, 2006


In this darkened cave,
I'm trapped.

It's invisible light swallowing me whole,
drenching my lungs in tears as every last bit of breath is takin' from my grasp.

Stumbling slightly, tripping over memories; I can't seem to find myself...

only the character I've been playing.

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I know, it's not rhyming this time and I didn't want it to. It's mostly just how I've been feeling for a while, and I decided to ramble my way into this. What do you think?Please leave a comment, and I will return the favour - perhaps twice.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    It's alright. I mean it's not what I was expecting but it's still good. Is there something we need to talk about? I'm always here if you need to talk. Just IM me. ANyway you poem gets a 4.9/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Doesn't need rhymes, its really good without them.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Thats a great poem. i like poems that rhyme usually, but that was really deep and i loved it. keep up the good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    This is very good, I'm finding myself in a similar situation...because a lot of my poems are just feelings. BUT I liked this unique...yet scarily true...sometimes poetry is all the better free verse....you have clearly proven this...Brill...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    To me, when poems don't rhyme, they feel more real and the last line just made me think about myself so much. Thanks for sharing.

    please if you can take a look at mine If not that's fine.

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