Wow.. another masterpiece.. this is amazing.. i love who u portray sadness and depression in a different way than the usual.. its refreshing.. tho its reli sad and is even more solemn than other poems..
gr8 job
keep it up
take care
NannO

"Try insead of quit"
No problem, I write some poems to keep people going, I try to send that message to many people. I get low ratings too, and I think I should quit, but I push myself because I know I have a talent, and some people can't see that, and some do.

You see it. And for that, I thank you.

Back to this poem, ahaha. I loved it. Again, it really painted a picture in my mind. I love your style. It's so unique.

Chelsey

Great poem :) I love the imagery, and the clever way you have used the poem to paint a picture of somebody painting a picture!! The final line is well placed, it stands out from the others and brings the true feeling of the picture out from the words :)

Peace. [Sole]

Brilliant use of imagry within thsi peice, the ending is really strong and effective. overall it is a very good peice

5/5

Wow nice painting and nature imagery - Im a fan of nature stuff anyway but this just makes me jealous =]

Wow, i have to say this poem is so amazing, I loved it, seriously you are such a good writer, I loved this poem and I understood it all the way through, the last line you wrote, "the picture is me" well, I loved it, and never expected it, i love being suprised in poetry and I would of never of guessed of that line. I was really good. thank you so much for letting me read your poetry, i enjoy it very much.

Great poem, the imagery was fantastic, keep up the great work!

You could make it a little longer
but other than that its good

Unlike any other poem I've read... Excellent write. 5/5
As always~ Kate

P.S. I liked the way you broke up the lines in the poetry -- that's sometimes quite difficult to pull off. Keep trying different ways of breaking up the lines -- you're very skilled & I'd like to see even more of your work turn out like this. You're a very inspiring poet.

Really nice poem Kaylee, I read it in the discussion board, you are really talented. Timothy r

Really great poem
your really talented

Blew me away, Kaylee Rose you are one of the most talented poette I know, this is nothing short of amazing. Keep experimenting and writing...its great.

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Ooo very nice. i didnt understand the point of the poem..like what you were trying to say about the person until the end then i was oh man! thats deep. haha. good job!

btw thanks for the comment on my poem....and no i didnt say the word. it was sort of open for interpretation. i didnt really want to say what the word was because it restricts the meaning of the poem. this way it can mean many different things.

That was a good poem, good imagery, except in painting there are relatively few wild strokes. Other than that bravo madam

It pretty good. The topic was good but it went on a bit long. Somehow in patches it sort of lost its flow. BUt the overall theme and idea was good.

A lovely poem. once again put beautiful pictures in my mind when i read it wonderful!
xx ALLY xx

One of your best in my opinion!

This is so good! Never stop writing!

I love how in this poem you compare things to nature... It makes me feel even more in touch with the earth... THis poem is very deep and reachs me on many levals! A great write!

Wow you continue to impress me! I love the imagery in your poems.. its great when you read someones poem and you really feel it but its just awesome when you can see it too.. its amazing how you can do both!What a great way to put sadness and depression in a different context.. amazing write!

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