It was fun

by xXxAngelEyes007xXx   Mar 26, 2006


It was fun
but now it's done

you were there
but did you care

it was me
not us three

It was fun
but now it's done

I feel lost
but I'll never be crossed

I felt safe when you held me near
but now you are not here

It was fun
but now it's done

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  • 17 years ago

    by Yuna

    I lived this poem a lot! I read between the lines, and got a lot of it. YOu made this poem a masterpiece and I ave to say that you did a wonderful job with it. It was simple, yet so powerful. You have a gift Bubblez. Keep it. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by PoetryHeart

    Very nice! i liked how it kept repeating

    It was fun
    but now it's done

    i really liked it! short but sweet lol. thx for the comment!

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    You really expressed your feelings great job hun keep writing and take care sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by WitherBlisterBurnandPeel

    Wow, that was great
    and thank you for the wonderful comment

  • 18 years ago

    by katrina porter

    This is very good/ Have a good tyme writing poems that show how you feel. You are an awesome poet Sk8erchic

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