Lost

by Tink   Mar 27, 2006


When love goes wrong,
What am I to do?
When my life's a mess,
What am I to say?
When I feel dead inside-
Emotionless,
How am I to act?
When my world stops spinning,
How am I to feel?
When everything is out of place,
Where am I to go?
When nothing's going right,
Who am I to trust?
Confused.
Dead.
Lost.
Hurt.
Blind.
What am I to do?

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  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Wow.. Great write.. Very interesting writing structure.. I really enjoyed this poem.. I like the questions and how they are left unanswered.. very thought provoking awesome write! keep it up! =)

    --emotionless.19*

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very good. good rhythum and interest generated by it's form and great content

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenny

    Good poem, you have a unique writing skill, great!! - keep up the good work!

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