Biggest mistake...

by PURE HEART   Mar 28, 2006


Why did you do this to me?
do i look fool to you?
I never wanted forced love
do i need to tell you too???

You made fun of me,
and took me for granted.
You uprooted our relationship ,
which i had planted.

You gave me the pain,
i never supposed to bear.
You made me alone in this world,
and not even bothered to hear.

How mean uyo are, how cruel you are,
its shame on me that i loved you.
Its like expecting from a stone,
that he will love you too.

My expectations will be ruined,
i never imagined so far.
You shattered my dreams so easily,
and left me with a painful scar.

Now you are just out of my life,
and let me live my life my way.
You will be the biggest mistake of mine,
and i wont forget it in anyway...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Adriana

    This poem is the best poem ever.. you really poured you heart out on this one...good job

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Thanks for your suggestion -Joe and Ann. now i have sucessfully edited it.

  • 18 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Very nice poem, many people can relate to that kind of relationship. I like the pictures you used: uprooting the relationship, love from a stone, etc.

    Since you have it in the love section, you should go through and write out all the shortcuts (u, r, 4) unless you want to put it in the slang section.

    Good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Awesome Poem. Very well written. All I have to say is don't you slang terminology. instead of using u or r, use you or are. also use apostropy's when need. other than that awesome poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Sad but great def another 5/5, all your poems are fantastic I love the way you word them keep them coming hun and take care sarah x

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