by SERAbaby Mar 28, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
They made you real upset, |
Love ur poem...its so kewl |
by Kaitlyn
This is really good. I feel you could have explored the emotion deeper, but there is no doubt that this is terrific. it flowed really well and grabbed me in. great doll. |
by Kaylee
Coz you didn't stay strong and tough. |
by Fallen~Tears
Great write i thought it showed excellent emotion in it.... 5/5 |
by PS
I realy like this. its awesome. i could be a little deeper. really touch on the guilt that the people feel. but i like it the way it is too. |