Broken

by WitherBlisterBurnandPeel   Mar 28, 2006


The simplicity of falling in love
The complexity of being in it

I watch as they all fly above
without a care in the world

I'm down here picking up the pieces of me
that everyone in my life has shattered

I'm not all that I'm cracked up to be
I have a hard shell, and a soft inside

Everyday i have to deal with the pain
that I'll never be with you

Knowing that is driving me insane
I don't believe I'll ever be able to grow wings

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow! This is a really good poem!
    Thanks for commenting mine..

  • 17 years ago

    by xCezx

    You just totaly summed up how I'm feeling in this poem! your a great poet and I look forward to reading more of your work!

    Cez xxx

    (thanks for your comment by the way x)

  • 17 years ago

    by Elisa

    Hunny thats sooo sad. why???? i want to know whats wrong with your shattered heart. i believe in the saying, you can only break my heart once, but after that theres nothing left to break. but who broke your heart? and it shouldnt be your progotive to pick the pieces up that a dumb person shattered in the frist place

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxAngelEyes007xXx

    Wow this is on of the greatest poems i have ever read you should definetly keep writting it's wut you good at from wut i have read of your work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Wow. I think you have captured my feelings in those few lines perfectly! We have something in common . . . I have to admit, the poem seemed a little off at times, but with time, that will improve as you write more. Which I sincerely hope you do :) Nice work.

    Peace. [Sole]

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