Inside mymind

I like this poem lots but think you have mis-spelt some-thing wrong in the second line!! wondeful poem though!

You are so great in writing and you know whay you write, i love each poem written by you cause they are full of true feelings.

This is reli beautiful.. intriguing rhyme scheme, but effective, nonetheless.. loved ur words... reli causes the reader to contemplate life and one's own thoughts..it was short, but to the point.. tho a little misleading and confusing.. gr8 job tho
take care
NannO

The rhyme and the flow within this one are great....I loved this truly a beautiful write.

Love Ann

Awesome Write. The was great. Keep up the good work.

~Joe~