Love Me More Than a Statue of Gold

by LadyPearl   Apr 1, 2006


What beauty lies in Thy eyes
Swarming bees of honey cries
Awaiting my appeasing kiss
Ah, such lust in gleaming bliss
Blooming arousement in thy hands
Oceans of jewels without no end
Tis a sorrow to lose this game
But I shall win in valor grace
You aroint me in vile haste
But such beauty can't die in waste
Waiting and waiting upon thy thee
Let down your guard, let me breath
What is it that you ask of me?

In Response...

A beauty yes, but only a statue of gold
An idol of admiration of men till I'm old
Like a red rose in a field of death
Time lingers and withers my soul
True, you are a man of great wealth
Prowling the night with eager stealth
Tempting young maidens to broken hearts
Judge me nought, I differ from those
Love me like no other men dares
See inside my yearning face so fair
Gaze at me, not this Idol I've become to be
Then I shall join your intimate seas

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fixxxer

    I love the imagery you use.. very unique, expressive, and touching.
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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    This was a very beautiful poem but I didnt really understand what was going on in it to well.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

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    by Sarah Ann

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