by Princess09 Apr 1, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
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Mom screams into the phone |
by dreamer88
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I loved this poem it touched my heart and it was a great likeness to the world today... alhtough hopefully your poem will help some to change...truely inspiring poem x |
by Tara Kay
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It was long, but that was the beauty of the poem, it had so much emotional, so much pain and sadness that it needed the length to fit it all in. I loved it. |
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I Think Its Sad That Alot Of Kids Today Are Parentless...Speaking As Someone Who Lost Their Dad As An Infant I Know How Hard It Is Without a Dad...Makes It Easier To Do Wrong...And Thats Just Not Good...5/5xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |
by Bridgette
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Wow.. I really love this and it puts in perspective what is going on in the world these days. My favorite stanza was: |
by Jen
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I love this poem... it just really touched my heart and soul... in some parts its true... disfunctional familys... i guess maybe you got the idea for this poem from your own family... a friends family... or a family you heard about before. The world is going down... down... and pitifully fast... but the love is still there... maybe its slowly disapearing.. i dont know... and love hurts... but its definately THERE. anyways great write 5/5/5/5 -Jen- |