Killing Real Me

by End Of Eternity   Apr 2, 2006


Wheels were on fire last night
while my scarlet eyes were burning bright
tales of my life were running inside my mind
last night was simply one of a kind

racing blindly to the road to nowhere
hoping to clash with something somewhere
blood stains on my car's window
coming from a wound of a shadow

few blocks back i met with fortuity
i must have killed many at that very spot
don't remember what happened after that
screams all around my ears are all now i got

bleeding feets, bleeding glass, bleeding hands
this nightmare just doesn't ever seems to end
that crashing view with all those helpless faces
would haunt me till the end of my miserable days

so many years have passed me by like this
sometimes i stay alive, sometimes i miss
killing my own reflection to be someone else
hope someday my love for you would make sense

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    It tears my heart to see the way your heart was crying. excellent job on your poem. The imagery and word choices are outstanding.

    so many years have passed me by like this
    sometimes i stay alive, sometimes i miss
    killing my own reflection to be someone else
    hope someday my love for you would make sense

    Thes lines are gut wrenching. How sad :(
    Thinking of you with a smile on your face.
    Love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by norman

    Nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Adriana

    Wow! Very deep but i still love it a lot...like i said before you are a really good poet....

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Well written. The words were good. Of course there seemed a slight problem with the poem that can be overlooked because the rest seems to be amazing. Well done. An astounding piece.
    ~S3I -Faith

  • 18 years ago

    by ghastlyshadows

    Wow,... I love the story it tells, and the feeling it puts across... those you love are lucky

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