Black night

by LostForever   Apr 2, 2006


I look up at the sky,
on a clear bright day,
the sun lightening their joy,
and all I see is a black night.

My world is only darkness,
my life is only despair,
and as I cry to the bleeding black night,
I know hope will never be there.

The black night laughs in my sorrow,
doesn't wipe the tears from my eye,
The black night come through my window,
And smothered all my smiles.

The black night feels nothing,
The black night has no heart,
The back night eats up your happiness,
And leaves you lying in the crimson river,
The black night just doesn't care..

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  • 17 years ago

    by ImmortalKitty

    This piece shows great emtotion, the sentence structure and flow are awesome. I even enjoyed the content.

  • 17 years ago

    by x-aLeX bAbe-x

    Good explanation of how you have adapted to your fear girlie be strong ok xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by courtney

    Great poem full of feelings keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by t. h a l l i d a y *

    Wow.. that was amazing. I feel the same way! Add me and we can chat if yeah want.... beautiifulfaerie@hotmail.com

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is so good.