Go away

by u wish   Apr 3, 2006


Spilling my soul on some page
about some war i must wage
between my heart and my mind;
my eyes and the blind

they continue to mess with my mind
but i can't just leave them behind
to be taken in by hogs
and treated like dogs

so my current solution
is this current illusion
that they are all loved
and each held above

though i fear my act
will surely soon be hacked
and they will fall down
with me hurt on the ground

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ellie

    The rhyming is forced on the bottom two lines of the second stanza, unless that was done purposefully.

  • 17 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Good peice, very clearly written

  • 18 years ago

    by Banana

    Bravo... But who holds your heart and who holds your mind? And which one matters the most?

    ....Anonymous....

  • 18 years ago

    by vamp

    Awesome work =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Rob

    Love it!
    tis gr8