Be Free

by Allen   Apr 8, 2006


Days are no longer the same
there is no point anymore
your heart thrown out the door
what / who do you live for

Nights are no longer full
living an empty life
your mind never shifts from it
what are you to do

Living your life to the fullest
when you opened your heart
looking back on what happened
left behind, cold, torn apart

Now everything is behind you
moved on, moved apart
what happens in the future
will you find each other hearts

This has only been one
one aspect of your life
one love of your life
one strife in your life

Time to move on
leave the life of love
forget all the thoughts and pain
fly and be as free as a dove

© Allen Limjoco 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by Amnah

    Great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    This is pretty good. your rhyme is perfect and really moves the poem along. i love it. nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Vivid, varied and full of vitality!
    Very profound and colourful language....

    Great stuff!

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, awesome Job! I loved it. The Ryhme and Flow is superb. Keep up the good work.

    ~Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I thought it was really well written, emotions expressed well, great to read, overall a great job
    xxxxx

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