Sweet turns to sour

by мσяιтυяαм   Apr 8, 2006


Go away, f**k off and don't return
And if you do ill make sure you burn
If you don't shut your mouth you're dead
I'll put a bullet through your f**king head
All this time you were lying, you weren't my friend
So now I'm gonna bring you to your sorry end
I'm just seconds away from my ultimate goal
Bringing misery upon your pitiful soul
Plunging the knife in with ease
Twisting it round as I please
Madly laughing as I cut and slice
Making sure each cut is precise
Each cut so pretty and so deep
And little red tears they do weep
Can you feel me now? Can you feel my power?
This is where sweet turns to sour

all rights reserved, © Laurène Ferguson 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jin

    I can feel the anger it's very clear and visible. I feel this way about a few people right now as well, so as I read this one it makes me feel all my anger at once. Very well written with excellent description and imagery. Loves it! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    You have left ne speechless I really loved it! You really know how to write! Were you mad when you wrote it? Well any ways the emotions were powerfull! 5/5 ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by The Black Angel Lloyd Rose

    AWESOME!!! keep up the great work. loved it. 5/5. nice flow and use of words.

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