EGO- THE BREAKING FACTOR...

by PURE HEART   Apr 9, 2006


So proud I used to feel,
to have such a friend like you.
But you also left my hand in between,
which shows you are like others too.

Sharing the pains and sorrows,
and lending the shoulder to cry upon.
Now I cannot even see the hand that can,
wipe my tears and saying me "Come on".

The moments we shared cannot be forgotten,
neither by you nor by me.
Then why are these distances made,
Aparting one soul into two, I can see.

We used to hold each other's hand,
Standing so bolder in front of all.
No one could dare to make us apart,
And no one could create a wall.

I wonder what happened to the two pals,
That was known to all as in-separable.
I thought a lot wondering the reason,
its our ego which made our friendship breakable.

I am waiting for your apology,
And you are waiting for mine.
We are eager to talk to each other,
But we are taking so much time.

A crack between the two hearts,
Now never can be mended, I suppose.
But from bottom of my heart even today,
I wish if we could again come close.

***i feel that one of the reasons behind breaking of friendships is ego. isnt it?***

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  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Awww huni thats sooo meaningful i loved it so much u can really show how much pain u must b goin thru coz of friendship.and yes i think it is very true that sumtimes ego gets in the way of best friends.5/5 very amazinbg poem.

    hope you feel beta.......and dnt worry too much if a friend gose then anotha comes. thakecare.

    sonam

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    U r absolutely correct but i also believe in one thing...u can't make a clap with one hand. Difference between self respect and ego is of marginally thin line..so who will highlight that gap??

    well i hope that u guys get back together soon.

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by miss4re

    I fully agree, stubborness also. keep it up *****

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Amazing,very true, def another 5 vote can't wait till the nxt 1 take care sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I loved this poem. Its true, yes. And I think it was well written and well expressed.
    xxxx
    love Tara-Kay