Comments : When I die

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    That was so sad, i had tears in my eyes, its true though.
    Another good read for the day,
    keep it up
    xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Livenowdiel8ter

    Awesome job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephy

    Yay a new one! As I was signing on I was hoping you added something!
    I really like this one...makes you think..the questions you mention are really good...
    It's funny how you said your poems don't feel complete without my comment 'cause I feel the same! I'm always happy to hear what you have to say either when you comment or write something new
    Lots of love! -xxxxx-

  • 17 years ago

    by And smiles hide everything

    Once again extremely good. see everytime i read one of your poems I expect not to be surprised since they're always good but everytime it surprises me how good they are and how they make me think. good job. keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    HellO darl!
    I totally luv this poem.its true and meaningful!
    u r a wonderful writer thou
    keep it up hun
    Luv ya
    NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Very interesting read. i thought it was extremely touching and it just yanked out my own questions i would ask. thansk for making me think : )
    Always,
    -Suzie

  • 17 years ago

    by Emma

    Aw wow this is depressing. and it makes me think...what would i say?? amazing as always, you are such a great writer : )

  • 17 years ago

    by Cuddles

    This is so sad, and it really makes a person wonder. What would I say? It's a wonderful poem, Mona. Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kirsty

    Hey there again my sweet
    I've been away for quite some time now
    But im back and feeling better
    Ive written loads new stuff during so ill post them up!!
    but thank you
    to come back and read your writing again really makes me content!!
    i hope you have been well
    i have missed you!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Death is always a mystery nice poem 5/5 wahoooooooooo go fish bowl

  • 17 years ago

    by ~Amanda~

    I like this poem a lot and i like the other poems that u have written 2, good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by .+.unpretty_loser.+.

    Wow, great job, well done. 5/5. i know the feeling.
    keep up the great work
    love jessie xoxo
    ps, if you have time could you please check out some of mine?

  • 17 years ago

    by heartbrOken

    Touched me ='[ but in a qwed way l0l

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Interesting topic. It keot my attention from beginning to end. I find thesepoems to be very sad but in a way inspirational to know that many others feel the same but that life is worth living even during those most difficult phases.

  • 17 years ago

    by WitherBlisterBurnandPeel

    Wow i loved it, it was very unique!
    great work!

  • I Love The Plot Of This Poem But I Was Astonished By The Amazing Ending... This Must Be What Its Like To See a True "Mona Lisa Smile" 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo
    -Keep Poetry Alive-

  • 17 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    I'm not afraid to die
    But if you'd point a gun at my head
    I would beg for my life and cry
    What would be the last I said?

    ^

    That is the best stanza in the whole poem.

    Nice work, I really like this poem.

    It has an amazing truth and meaning to it, because so many people say they want to die and they're going to try and kill themselves, but what happens when they are actually faced with death?

    Are they begging for their life, or what?

    Nice job. Made me think.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rosie

    Awww hunnie!!! Amazing poem.
    It's a very sad poem yet mysterious!! Your writing is amazing at it stuns me everytime. Like i always say..
    I hope that one day i'm as good a poet as you are Mona!!
    Your poems tell us a lot about you and show us a great deal of talent that you have.
    Keep up the good work and keep writing!!
    Love ya loads
    Rosie xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by Torn

    I love the idea. It's such a confusing topic, well i think anyway...can be interpreted in so many different ways.
    I loved the questions..i believe we all have them, they're so true.
    And i agree with Justin too..
    It's a puzzling idea..well done sweet cheeks.
    Haha ^^where'd that come from!?

    Love ya xoxoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    HYE MONA
    You writes a murky poems. your works is perfect.
    i like your poems