That was so sad, i had tears in my eyes, its true though.
Another good read for the day,
keep it up
xxxxx

Awesome job!

Yay a new one! As I was signing on I was hoping you added something!
I really like this one...makes you think..the questions you mention are really good...
It's funny how you said your poems don't feel complete without my comment 'cause I feel the same! I'm always happy to hear what you have to say either when you comment or write something new
Lots of love! -xxxxx-

Once again extremely good. see everytime i read one of your poems I expect not to be surprised since they're always good but everytime it surprises me how good they are and how they make me think. good job. keep it up.

HellO darl!
I totally luv this poem.its true and meaningful!
u r a wonderful writer thou
keep it up hun
Luv ya
NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

Very interesting read. i thought it was extremely touching and it just yanked out my own questions i would ask. thansk for making me think : )
Always,
-Suzie

Aw wow this is depressing. and it makes me think...what would i say?? amazing as always, you are such a great writer : )

This is so sad, and it really makes a person wonder. What would I say? It's a wonderful poem, Mona. Excellent job!

Hey there again my sweet
I've been away for quite some time now
But im back and feeling better
Ive written loads new stuff during so ill post them up!!
but thank you
to come back and read your writing again really makes me content!!
i hope you have been well
i have missed you!!

Death is always a mystery nice poem 5/5 wahoooooooooo go fish bowl

I like this poem a lot and i like the other poems that u have written 2, good job!

Wow, great job, well done. 5/5. i know the feeling.
keep up the great work
love jessie xoxo
ps, if you have time could you please check out some of mine?

Touched me ='[ but in a qwed way l0l

Interesting topic. It keot my attention from beginning to end. I find thesepoems to be very sad but in a way inspirational to know that many others feel the same but that life is worth living even during those most difficult phases.

Wow i loved it, it was very unique!
great work!

I Love The Plot Of This Poem But I Was Astonished By The Amazing Ending... This Must Be What Its Like To See a True "Mona Lisa Smile" 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo
-Keep Poetry Alive-

I'm not afraid to die
But if you'd point a gun at my head
I would beg for my life and cry
What would be the last I said?

^

That is the best stanza in the whole poem.

Nice work, I really like this poem.

It has an amazing truth and meaning to it, because so many people say they want to die and they're going to try and kill themselves, but what happens when they are actually faced with death?

Are they begging for their life, or what?

Nice job. Made me think.

Awww hunnie!!! Amazing poem.
It's a very sad poem yet mysterious!! Your writing is amazing at it stuns me everytime. Like i always say..
I hope that one day i'm as good a poet as you are Mona!!
Your poems tell us a lot about you and show us a great deal of talent that you have.
Keep up the good work and keep writing!!
Love ya loads
Rosie xXx

I love the idea. It's such a confusing topic, well i think anyway...can be interpreted in so many different ways.
I loved the questions..i believe we all have them, they're so true.
And i agree with Justin too..
It's a puzzling idea..well done sweet cheeks.
Haha ^^where'd that come from!?

Love ya xoxoxo

HYE MONA
You writes a murky poems. your works is perfect.
i like your poems