One issue

by Bitten by frost   Apr 9, 2006


You've got ONE issue
lying there
with bloodied wrists
and bloodied hair,

You've got ONE issue
hanging down
with rope on neck
coiled around

You've got ONE issue
upon that ledge
that twelve floor drop
to which you edge

You've got ONE issue
on this here track
a moving train
behind your back

You've got ONE issue
that issue is YOU
who'd end your life
before life's end due

YOU who'd suffer
from life's first strife
would gladly run
and end your life

YOU who would kill
yourself unthinking
of'th'lives you wreck
from blade and blood linking.

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  • 18 years ago

    by pain is me

    Love it
    flowed great
    good job
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Exellent! love it. the diferent dicriptions of suicide, and the end moral were all fantastic! it flowed cvery well
    thanks for your comment!!

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by stephalee

    Um this is an awesome poem and ur awesome too because u wrote it! so yea ..awesome!=D