Throught with you

by gemowski   Apr 10, 2006


Oh why oh why do i sit and cry,
everyday and every night.

oh my oh my i sit and cry,
it cuts and hurts so deep inside,

i feel hopeless, i feel hate, cause once again you've shut that gate,

but this time we're through I'm done with you,
Ive told and told you till Ive turned blue.

I'm sick of crying feeling like dying, all because of you,

and now I'm strong i can go on,
living my life with out you.

please feel free to leave your comments I'd love to hear what you all think.

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  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    This should go under the sad category because it was so full of emotion and sorrow felt the most prominent in this. What you have is good but with more attention to detail, digging a little deeper even it could be better...

    Still nice stuff...

    [lost_laureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Sammib

    Awesome!! not the pain part, but getting the feelings out and knowing that its time to move on... you go girl!! Loved it!!

    God bless

    Sammib

  • 18 years ago

    by p4y5c0

    That was a sad poem it made me feel sad but it was a good one tho! great work keep it up!

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