by BlueDreams Apr 10, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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You give me hope, make me whole |
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WOW, this is a very well written poem. |
by Goran Rahim
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Wow, this one made me speechless, i wish i could have such talent that you have, you are great..........5/5 |
by Esther
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I like this but could i suggest putting more breaks in!! it is nice how it is but i think that that would improve it!! |
by smile
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Wow this is really lovely |
by Ann Stareyes
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Ohhhh Bert, such a beautiful write. You are the sweetest soul and I hope you know that. I always wish life to be happy for you....Please write more I love to read your work....take care |