The lonely boy

by IMMORTAL PAIN   Apr 10, 2006


There was a boy his name is Rome,

he had no family,friends, or home,

Rome was sad he cried all day,

because the kids never asked him to play,

Rome was always the lonely boy,

until he met a kid named Roy,

they became good friends, and always played,

they would run to hallandale, then to Dade,

the kids didn't like this so they made a plan,

the shot up Roy, then Rome ran,

Rome was alone, for the next few years,

he cried his heart out, till he found some shears(sharp siccors),

Rome thought...he could end it all,

just one stab then he took a fall,

Rome was dying all alone,

all Rome could do was cry and moan,

Rome grabbed the shears and stabbed some more,

till Rome was motionless on the floor,

his body lay with a big bloody stain,

this is what happens in lonely pain....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melinda

    It's sad but very good i mean really good

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    I thought that the beginning of the poem was kind of weak but it became stronger at the end of the poem, the rhyming is a bit forced, and also the flow is not completely perfect, so I will have to give you 4/5
    kisses Stephanie

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    The poem was very sad and full of emotions. But it still was a very well written poem w/o a doubt! ^_^

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