Comments : WHY DID YOU MAKE ME LOVE YOU?

  • 13 years ago

    by Danny Bloom

    DUDE this is romeo and juliet style haha i love it but dude so tragic...mine are too!!!! lol haha i love it keep writing dude but if you are the girl you better not kill yourself like that jeez that wouldnt be the smart thing to do lol

  • 13 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Wut a creative way to write somethiing....grrt job and keep writing, thx for ur comment...
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 13 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Wut a creative way to write somethiing....grrt job and keep writing, thx for ur comment...
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 13 years ago

    by Yasmine

    Was this a scene in movie or what? **** this love that would end someone's life!!! I can't believe this girl was stupid enough to sacrifice her life for a stupid cheater!

    P.S. I'd be very happy and honored to read your 'Jasmine' poem :) I love jasmines very much :) thanks for your comment, Shayma :)

  • 13 years ago

    by SammyLynn

    Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Omg dis is one hell of a awsum poem....i loved it so much espcially the end where the note sed " y did u make me lvoe u" n the bit wen he cut himself going"As I loved u more".....aww so sad....but awsum wwork, this deserves a 200/200...am i getting a lil carried away?...too bad haha i loved this sooo much....i got a poem writtien lyk this its called: open the door but the girl kills the bf lol...
    adding u to ma favs!!:D...love dia mwaz xoxo

  • 13 years ago

    by Crystal

    This poem is very intense, but I really liked this. You never know what you got until its gone, right? Awesome job!! I am adding you to my favorites.

  • 11 years ago

    by Bittersweet

    A Perfecttt poem....

  • 11 years ago

    by samantha

    This is rly sad but good.

  • 11 years ago

    by mohamed

    Wow very sad ending... hey when writing about die for love is cool. but never do in real life. be strong and smart.. well written..5/5

    its nice to meet u too...

  • 11 years ago

    by Bittersweet

    I read it again and again and again...really really like iiiit....

  • 11 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aww!!!...it was so sad!!!....wow....it almost made me cry, but not quite. great job on this. i liked it!!!!
    Aly

  • 11 years ago

    by Just Jessy

    Awww I Well Like That!! Its Actually Amazing:D

  • 11 years ago

    by Nawa

    Omg that was amazing tragic but amazing, it actually brought a tear to my eye. I love it. Its really great and well written.

  • 11 years ago

    by The Queen

    Absolutely stood up from the rest...It brought chills to me and my homies..Amazingly Done..Great Job..I really mean it..xDD

  • 11 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow that was amazing! It was so sad it like really brough tears to my eyes. keep up the wonderful work! 5/5 for sure

    o and thanx for the comment!

  • 11 years ago

    by FiguringThisOutAsIGo

    Wow that was amazing!

    it was like romeo and juliet, but better i think! it really has that "Awe" power

    gr8 job
    5/5

  • Omg... this is so sad and so beaitful... i tired to pick a part that i loved the most but i fell in love with it all!!

    5/5 well done

    i loved it!!

    xoxo

  • 11 years ago

    by madlyinlove

    Wow this was an amazing poem i loved it..... i felt tears in my eyes. you are a really good writer, keep them comin, good poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a tragic story. It's more like a short story than a poem. Anyway there are some unanswered question in your story. You need to explain things like why did that guy broke up with him even though he loves her. My suggestion: Before he dies you should have explained why the girl died.

    Anyway it was a great story, good job.
    Thanks for the comment on my poem.