DUDE this is romeo and juliet style haha i love it but dude so tragic...mine are too!!!! lol haha i love it keep writing dude but if you are the girl you better not kill yourself like that jeez that wouldnt be the smart thing to do lol

Wut a creative way to write somethiing....grrt job and keep writing, thx for ur comment...
love ya lots,
sore

Wut a creative way to write somethiing....grrt job and keep writing, thx for ur comment...
love ya lots,
sore

Was this a scene in movie or what? **** this love that would end someone's life!!! I can't believe this girl was stupid enough to sacrifice her life for a stupid cheater!

P.S. I'd be very happy and honored to read your 'Jasmine' poem :) I love jasmines very much :) thanks for your comment, Shayma :)

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!

Omg dis is one hell of a awsum poem....i loved it so much espcially the end where the note sed " y did u make me lvoe u" n the bit wen he cut himself going"As I loved u more".....aww so sad....but awsum wwork, this deserves a 200/200...am i getting a lil carried away?...too bad haha i loved this sooo much....i got a poem writtien lyk this its called: open the door but the girl kills the bf lol...
adding u to ma favs!!:D...love dia mwaz xoxo

This poem is very intense, but I really liked this. You never know what you got until its gone, right? Awesome job!! I am adding you to my favorites.

A Perfecttt poem....

This is rly sad but good.

Wow very sad ending... hey when writing about die for love is cool. but never do in real life. be strong and smart.. well written..5/5

its nice to meet u too...

I read it again and again and again...really really like iiiit....

Aww!!!...it was so sad!!!....wow....it almost made me cry, but not quite. great job on this. i liked it!!!!
Aly

Awww I Well Like That!! Its Actually Amazing:D

Omg that was amazing tragic but amazing, it actually brought a tear to my eye. I love it. Its really great and well written.

Absolutely stood up from the rest...It brought chills to me and my homies..Amazingly Done..Great Job..I really mean it..xDD

Wow that was amazing! It was so sad it like really brough tears to my eyes. keep up the wonderful work! 5/5 for sure

o and thanx for the comment!

Wow that was amazing!

it was like romeo and juliet, but better i think! it really has that "Awe" power

gr8 job
5/5

Omg... this is so sad and so beaitful... i tired to pick a part that i loved the most but i fell in love with it all!!

5/5 well done

i loved it!!

xoxo

Wow this was an amazing poem i loved it..... i felt tears in my eyes. you are a really good writer, keep them comin, good poem.

It was a tragic story. It's more like a short story than a poem. Anyway there are some unanswered question in your story. You need to explain things like why did that guy broke up with him even though he loves her. My suggestion: Before he dies you should have explained why the girl died.

Anyway it was a great story, good job.
Thanks for the comment on my poem.