Without You, I'm Nothing

by Synh   Apr 10, 2006


Part of me died
My heart stopped beating
Thoughts quit racing
Life lost its meaning

I think back to that time
That most horrific day
When I broke your heart
And threw our love away

You are far from me
Gone is our love which was true
I miss your soft touch
I miss my world that is you

Now I wake from slumber
Realizing it was all but a dream
I look around to find you
But the mirror reveals only me

I hope to find you now
Before your goodbye sings
I realize now I need you
Without you, Im nothing

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  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww.. this is just too sad.. and soo cute though.. very simple words but still the emotion and the words are strong.. something about you waking up and seeing only yourself was a really great stanza.. idk why lol.. anyways.. truely amazing job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Omg!!!! i love it!!!! keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Part of me died
    My heart stopped beating
    Thoughts quit racing
    Life lost its meaning
    ((I really liked this line))
    hope to find you now
    Before your goodbye sings
    I realize now I need you
    Without you, Im nothing
    ((You broke rhyme here, Bad!))

    Besides the broken rhyming scheme, this poem wasn't too bad.. But it was very cliche.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 19 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Awh, that one brought tears to my eyes aswell. I can actually relate in away, and I really loved this poem. The flow was great aswell.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. that was adorable! what a wonderful poem! it flowed well and the emotion was all there..nice job!

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