A Beautiful Rhapsody

by LiL K   Apr 11, 2006


My boyfriend wrote this poem and I thought it was sweet, so I asked him if I could put it on here...let me know what you think!

One glance of your eyes
or touch of your skin
Gives me a high
That has no end...

The scent of your body
One breath of your hair
A beautiful Rhapsody
With an intoxicating glare...

Takes me to a place
Further than I've ever been
Past the depths of space
For this I hope has no end.

Votes & comments are appreciated and WILL be returned! Thanks

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  • 17 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Wow....your boyfriend can certainly write. This is so cute, I love this phrase....
    "Beautiful Rhapsody
    With an intoxicating glare..."

    And must take a stunning person to have inspired such a tender poem....

    Ace!

    [lost_laureate]

  • 18 years ago

    by mike

    There is no question in mind about this work i have come to a conclusion and i just began to understand that poems are so different in many ways and yet the same in many other ways and most established poets would agree to what i have said take my work for an example and you will see what i mean especialy the comments the godess is a fine example of my work i think i have come from another perspective with this fine work and i am sure after time you will also come to the same conclusion.

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Awwww.... how cute! Great boyfriend you have. :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Awwe that is SO cute!!! he wrote that for you? He sounds so sweet! this is a great poem : )

  • 18 years ago

    by crazygirlinluvwitu

    Aww sounds like he loves you a lot! =)
    its really sweet, i luv the feeling he wrote it with.