I Need You

by Allison   Apr 12, 2006


Eyes that sparkle
Teeth that shine
I pray for the day
That you will be mine

Flawless face
Angelic grace
Why can't you see me
In this small and lonely place

I need you to love me
The way that I love you
I need you to hold me
And give me the happiness I never knew

* Please tell me what you think. This is the first time that I have wrote a love poem. I guess that I have just never found my muse.*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a good poem for your first love poem. Anyway I have a suggestion to improve this piece :) Try to use punctuations. Nonetheless it was a great though I wish it was longer :)

    Keep writing and thanks for the comment :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved this! It was real easy for me to relate with it and the images you described were heartwarming. Beautiful love poem *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    I love this poem!
    Your feelings where beautifully expressed
    And the flow was flawless,
    I feel this way right now too :(
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    I need you to love me
    The way that I love you
    I need you to hold me
    And give me the happiness I never knew

    awwwwwwwwwww. what a gr8 style of writing in few stanzas you have shoed what is the love. you realy know its meaning and you know what is love? i think it relates to me... gr8 wrk take care. thx for comments they mean lot to me. i have added u in my favourite list 5/5!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aww. i thought this was really sweet. you did really good! well done huni

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

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