Destiny

by PoeticJustice   Apr 13, 2006


The sun shines brightly as it rises, to
A new day, open to new surprises

But in the dark
A shadowy soul cant see the hope because it is blind
Blind from searching for the destiny it cannot find

It needs someone, a helping and guiding hand
Someone to explain and to help it understand

The new day is its only hope for continuation
To find someone to ask for an explanation

The sun is its permission, the permission to write a new page in its life
The new day is its blank sheet of paper on which it is allowed to write

It wants to know its destiny, everyday it looks for a path
A path to its lost destiny the one it wishes to have

If only if it focused on what is right in front, then on what is mile ahead
If only if it knew that the present is what chooses its destiny, not the miles ahead

If only if it knew that its destiny is not just already written,
You have to write it yourself with gods help and what god has given

Its the chances that he gives you and the decisions you make
The choices that you choose and the chances that you take

Thats what makes your destiny but you dont have to get their on your own
Since it doesnt know this, it doesnt have its destiny, so it feels alone

The shadowy soul is lost, it needs a helping hand
Someone to guide and to help it understand

That guiding hand is near, its close to all of us on earth
Its going to see its demise, just as it saw its birth

That guiding hand is god, he knows its destiny
He leads it in the right path but just lets it roam free

That shadowy soul is lost it needs a helping hand
If only it looked towards god to help it understand

Each day the sun rises, to compose a new sentence in its life
But its focused on its destiny so it doesnt know what to write

If only the shadowy soul looked up instead of miles ahead
If only if would have listened to god, then it would just be dead

So now its destiny is written because of the decisions it choose to make
The decision to ignore god, was its biggest mistake

So listen to god people, because he can help you write your destiny
dont just focus on the future, listen to god and then make your next move on what your truly want to be

If you listen and take this advice you wont end up like that shadowy soul on the ground
Lost in a wave of madness searching for its destiny, the one that will never be found.

~~i really like this one, it came out of nowhere, imma start writing all my poems in free verse scheme now.
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  • 16 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Quite long, but has great depth. well written and great choice of words!!! keep up the good work =o]

  • 17 years ago

    by Kenya Dawn

    Well im glad it was a good "wow"...lol...appritiate it...or however u spell that...lol..sry...not really all here today...lol...well im out..thnx again...and im glad u can relate to my poems...i can relate to urs too...well some of them...lol...

    *Kenya Dawn*