Never Be Together((ACROSTIC))

by Catastrophic Beauty   Apr 14, 2006


Now my love for you grows
Even though deep down I know
Visualizing being with you longer
Each day don't make us stronger
Really just makes me wronger

But I continuously strive to be with you
Even with the pain I'm going through

Tears are falling down from my eyes
Over and over I try so hard not to cry
Got a wish but it never comes true
Every time I wish to be with you
Torn was once the state of my heart
How could you put back every part
Every dream says we'll last forever
Reality says we'll never be together

PLEASE COMMENT ITS THE FIRST TIME I'VE DONE AN ACROSTIC LIKE THIS! THANKS

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  • 16 years ago

    by littlemissxsunshine

    This is soo good
    i love acrostic poems
    (=
    i can relate alot
    very good kepp it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a good acrostic poem, the rhyming words in this poem is kinda 'force' well it's your 1st acrostic poem anyway.. So well done! Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by coupon can

    This is REALLY good for ur first time. like woah good. i've never actually done one because i suck at them. but ur like reaaaaallly good.

  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    For your first acrostic this is really well done. the rhyme is perfect. you are a very good writer.

    xo kisses xo

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenSoul

    Omg thats so neat..
    I haven't really seen an acrostic poem before, but that was really good..
    I could never think of that Well Done!!
    5/5

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