Painful Memories...

by Lying To Live   Apr 16, 2006


Painful memories
Racing through my head
Painful memories
Making me wish I were dead

Your voice
I hear all the things you say
Your voice
Will taunt me till my dieing day

Its hurts
To see you hurt others the way you do
It hurts
To see I never meant anything to you

I cry
When these thoughts race around my mind
I cry
When I think about the times I wish I could rewind

Its hurts
To see you happy while I am depressed
It hurts
When you should be the one distressed

Your voice
It hangs around like a bad smell
Your voice
The memories making my life hell

Painful memories
Are why Im where I am today
Painful memories
Forcing me to take my life this way

plz comment and vote id like to see wat my work means to some...XoX thank you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I think it's alright. It's good word choice but maybe make it more in depth. Also you might want to correct dieing to dying. You probably were typing fast.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lying To Live

    Omg thank you so much sumtimes i type them so fast they dont make sense ....your a legend thank you ...XoX...and yes thats exactly what i meant i shall go chnage it right now