Illness ( ana and mia )

by Lying To Live   Sep 17, 2006


Skin stretched over bones
Like lollies in there wrapper
Tastes so delightful
To see such inner beauty
Inner beauty so very important
Although
It is better when in meets out
So close together
They are one
The same
Mouth left untouched
Like a rotten piece of fruit
Except for occasional gum
To keep the muscles moving
Remind them of their job
Hair is getting thinner
Thighs no longer orange peel
Hipbones so distinct
And collarbones of mass destruction
Feeling so powerless
Yet never had more control
Never been better
It is the life of self-absorbed
Illness
My friends
Mia
And
Ana

Im sorry if this didnt make much sense to many of you ... i wrote it in a very weird frame of mind ... thanks for reading ... comments appreciated if you didnt understand bits of it ...XoX

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  • 17 years ago

    by XxxXLoveless_WristsXxxX

    This is really good...as I said before...

    You are such a great person, a talented poet and a great friend...and I really do hope we can work everything out!

    Keep writing...and I am still here for you no matter what

    x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by HuggyQueenofCookies

    Please write more, you are so talented!!

    --ally

  • 17 years ago

    by XxxXLoveless_WristsXxxX

    Sweetheart, this is so sad! It made me want to cry! Especially the lines: Skin stretched over bones
    Like lollies in there wrapper
    Tastes so delightful
    To see such inner beauty
    And also these ones: Hipbones so distinct
    And collarbones of mass destruction
    Feeling so powerless
    Yet never had more control

    I can relate so much and remember I am here for you...I love you P.U.B x x

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