I really like your poem, the way the first few lines made me want to read the whole thing. i will definately read some of your other poems. good job and good luck

The darkness will stalk us......and, we Must move on...
We Do Get To Decide!!! Someone ? once said...'If you find yourself going through hell....keep going!!'

This is a moving poem...at times rhymically a bit uneven...but poetically effective, definitely gets your pictures across....All the Best your way.....
sincerely...

PS...I tried to comment Friends Without Faces..couldn't get in...Just wanted to say I would be a friend With a face if I could just get this machine to upload!!!As they say... lol and Oh well...Very sweet poem..

Since you have been gone, I am trapped in this pain
Misery keeps following me again and again
Trying to realize where have I gone wrong
Who was I once and what I have become

beautiful stanza, i could very well relate to this one

Chasing your shadow I keep walking on this endless road
Loneliness ahead, emptiness behind how long can I go on?

there could have been no better ending than this one.

I know i am the best dear but for a person like you, best ain't enough, u deserve far more than that.. :o)
It was my pleasure to be part of this work.

all the best and take care

Hey darling u wr0te this really g0od. very t0uching piece. great use 0f w0rds. just a great j0b. l0t 0f em0ti0n. keep it up

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

This poem was awesome
"The book of sorrow is stuck on one page
No mater how hard I run, I breathe in the same cage"
I love those lines! good job
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Truly remarkable!! Fantastic job done on this! *smiles* Very moving piece!

Wonderfully penned, very nicely done, bravo!!!

This book of sorrow is stuck on one page
No matter how hard I run, I breathe in the same cage
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the best stanza ;)!
I liked the poem overall! so sweet! hope things will turn to be ok =)
ur poem was really amazing keep up the gr8 work
Luv
NemO XxXxXxXxXxX

Heyy that was an awsum poem, igave u a5/5, i cn really relate.

This is a beautiful poem....keep up the good work your doing great!!!5/5

This poem was gorgeous!! you express feelings well on paper. keep up the brilliant work..
love bertie
xxx

OMG it's so beautiful..I loved it...Keep up the GREAT work...SAMANTHA

I really like this poems its great.

Wow i really like this 1

This poem is so good. u write great poems!

Fantastic
great stuff
5/5
i'll add you to my favourites
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"This book of sorrow is stuck on one page" I hear ya! I understand what you're going through. Great poem!! I loved it!

This poem is amazing, I like it a lot...The whole poem is perfect. Keep writing. 5/5

Nothing worse than walking lost bcoz the trip then will be very hard and road will be full of blocks. you reminded me while i was reaching the end of ure poem of road not taken. wishing all the best my sweeety.

love