PS...I tried to comment Friends Without Faces..couldn't get in...Just wanted to say I would be a friend With a face if I could just get this machine to upload!!!As they say... lol and Oh well...Very sweet poem..
This poem was awesome
"The book of sorrow is stuck on one page
No mater how hard I run, I breathe in the same cage"
I love those lines! good job
if you have the chance, please check out my poem impulse
- Words are only treasured when they are truely spoken
This book of sorrow is stuck on one page
No matter how hard I run, I breathe in the same cage
the best stanza ;)!
I liked the poem overall! so sweet! hope things will turn to be ok =)
ur poem was really amazing keep up the gr8 work
Nothing worse than walking lost bcoz the trip then will be very hard and road will be full of blocks. you reminded me while i was reaching the end of ure poem of road not taken. wishing all the best my sweeety.