Comments : Endless Road Of Misery

  • 14 years ago

    by ENTROPY

    I really like your poem, the way the first few lines made me want to read the whole thing. i will definately read some of your other poems. good job and good luck

  • 14 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    The darkness will stalk us......and, we Must move on...
    We Do Get To Decide!!! Someone ? once said...'If you find yourself going through hell....keep going!!'

    This is a moving poem...at times rhymically a bit uneven...but poetically effective, definitely gets your pictures across....All the Best your way.....
    sincerely...

  • 14 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    PS...I tried to comment Friends Without Faces..couldn't get in...Just wanted to say I would be a friend With a face if I could just get this machine to upload!!!As they say... lol and Oh well...Very sweet poem..

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Since you have been gone, I am trapped in this pain
    Misery keeps following me again and again
    Trying to realize where have I gone wrong
    Who was I once and what I have become

    beautiful stanza, i could very well relate to this one

    Chasing your shadow I keep walking on this endless road
    Loneliness ahead, emptiness behind how long can I go on?

    there could have been no better ending than this one.

    I know i am the best dear but for a person like you, best ain't enough, u deserve far more than that.. :o)
    It was my pleasure to be part of this work.

    all the best and take care

  • 14 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darling u wr0te this really g0od. very t0uching piece. great use 0f w0rds. just a great j0b. l0t 0f em0ti0n. keep it up

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 14 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    This poem was awesome
    "The book of sorrow is stuck on one page
    No mater how hard I run, I breathe in the same cage"
    I love those lines! good job
    if you have the chance, please check out my poem impulse
    - Words are only treasured when they are truely spoken

  • 14 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Truly remarkable!! Fantastic job done on this! *smiles* Very moving piece!

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderfully penned, very nicely done, bravo!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Nee

    This book of sorrow is stuck on one page
    No matter how hard I run, I breathe in the same cage
    =======
    the best stanza ;)!
    I liked the poem overall! so sweet! hope things will turn to be ok =)
    ur poem was really amazing keep up the gr8 work
    Luv
    NemO XxXxXxXxXxX

  • 14 years ago

    by Seductive

    Heyy that was an awsum poem, igave u a5/5, i cn really relate.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    This is a beautiful poem....keep up the good work your doing great!!!5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Bernadette

    This poem was gorgeous!! you express feelings well on paper. keep up the brilliant work..
    love bertie
    xxx

  • 14 years ago

    by ~Samantha~

    OMG it's so beautiful..I loved it...Keep up the GREAT work...SAMANTHA

  • 14 years ago

    by Tylor Dent

    I really like this poems its great.

  • 14 years ago

    by alex

    Wow i really like this 1

  • 14 years ago

    by Amber

    This poem is so good. u write great poems!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sarah

    Fantastic
    great stuff
    5/5
    i'll add you to my favourites
    X

  • 14 years ago

    by Ashley

    "This book of sorrow is stuck on one page" I hear ya! I understand what you're going through. Great poem!! I loved it!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This poem is amazing, I like it a lot...The whole poem is perfect. Keep writing. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Nothing worse than walking lost bcoz the trip then will be very hard and road will be full of blocks. you reminded me while i was reaching the end of ure poem of road not taken. wishing all the best my sweeety.

    love