Without You

by Sarah Ann   Apr 17, 2006


Wet and warm
The water stills
As I sit inside the bath
Intently gazing
Steadily waiting
Pondering upon this path

Soft and sweet
Your voice it calls
As my body craves your own
Erotically
Perpetually
Silenced waiting all alone

Harsh and lonesome
Are my nights
As I wait by our door
Dolefully,
come back to me
I can't take this anymore

((Comments are appreciated. I will return favors.))

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    This was a very well written!... i liked the flow of it... i can't say that i would change anything about it!...wow that was a nice poem.. i enjoyed reading it.. 5/5!
    ~*Linz*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Daze

    Loved your poem, It was honeslty great, i have no suggestions to you other than this was a great poem, but its not a sugestion, just a comment but it truely was really good. thanks for the comments on my poem, i trule appreciate it,

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    "As my body craves your own"
    Made it seem like a drug, I really see where your going...like being with a memory talking to a memory
    I may again be making this all wrong
    But seriously I love your poetry, this is one of the best I've read today (and I've had to read quite a few)
    :)

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    Amazing gosh your so talented
    i envy you for being able to write a short poem with so much intensity in your words this is one of my favorite poems

  • 18 years ago

    by SANDRA

    AWW HOW CUTE LOVE UR POEM

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