Locked Up...

by Lying To Live   Apr 18, 2006


You watch me as I cry myself to sleep
Im not a piece of art at the show
So why am I here
please tell me as I do not know

Put me in this place to get better
Instead its making me go a little crazy
People treating me like a child
Waiting on me like a newborn baby

Im fine its just a few scratches
I promise Ill stop just let me out of here
I scream at the nurse
as my eyes start to tear

Whoops shouldnt have said that
Now they think Im losing control
They are going to make me stay here now
Keep me longer in this hole

I hate it here it stops me do anything
I cant read I cant write I cant express myself
This place Im stuck in
is the perfect explanation of my living hell

They keep me here until my scars have healed
I confess my secrets and I am saved
My life future is what they must alter
Everything I do after this they have paved

Making sure I dont go back
To all the naughty things I did
Cant they see this isnt the way
Im only a little kid

Ill lie here in bed till they let me out
I wont do anything they say
So they can make room for another patient
And send me home today

XoX ...comments are appreciared as well as votes ...bcuz i love to hear what you ahve to say about my writing...thank you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    One of the ending stanza's seemed a bt rushed. the poem was good and the general message I think I got, but it didn't project the feeling to the reader that you were expressing. It's good but maybe see where you can cut a few words down here and there.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    I really liked this one actually! the idea behind it was neat and everything seemed to flow more. good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Joy

    I lvoe it