I Think You'll be the One

by Katrina Boblina   Apr 27, 2006


*I'm warning you now, if you don't like strange gross poems, don't even read it!*

you think your smart
but I know the truth
your a liar and a scum
and you were a useless youth

I hate you to death
hmm that sounds fun
I want you to die...
I'm not the only one

me and my friends
want to see your eyes
me and my friends
would like to hear your cries

caress your skin
with the rusted sharp blade
a prick here and there
that we each have made

across your cheek
I carve away
"dirty bi ch"
is what it will say.

It was so much fun
I couldn't stop now
I grabbed each of my friends
I still don't know how

I tied them up good
and caressed each pale cheak
I found happiness watching
each slowly grow weak.

my blue jeans soaked
and now turned red
I'm still not sure
what went on in my head.

I can still remember
their sad sorry eyes
and I'll never forget
their sorrow filled cries.

but it doesn't stop there
no I still want more fun
who will be next
I think you'll be the one.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I thought this poem was just a wee bit corny. Like to me this poem sounds like your trying to be dark and mysterious when really that's not what you were wanting to be passionent about. I think instead of worrying what will come out.

    Next time just write what comes to your mind and edit it later if needed. you know what I mean.

    I'm not trying to say your a bad writer so don't think that...
    4/5
    kaila

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Again an amazing poem! im adding you to my favorites. Great Job!!! ( i like writing dark poems myself ) *wink* 5/5 awesome job!
    i like the last stanza the best again.

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I loved it even though it scared the shit out of me you are really a good writer and you should be noticed ur so unique in your poetry xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Oooh. wow. Now this is what you call a Dark poem! Tehe. I loved it actually. It's really different to most dark poems you read around here, and that's why I like it! Very nicely done! Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    I liked the first one i read better, they are fairly similar. there are a few little things id change to help it flow better, but i like it overall, good job!

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