by Ashley Van Eperen Apr 29, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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I spent all day, |
by Bridgette
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Wow that is so sad... it brought a tear to my eye cause I can relate to this 100%. You really let out your emotions on this and you did a great job on it. I loved it. |
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I try to hide my secrets, |
by Natalie
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This was really sad. Good though. The way you went through each stanza with what you were trying to forget was really good. Keep it up! 5/5 |
by Emma
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Great poem...very amazing word choice...and just an all together well written poem... |
by NoPatience
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Wow. you're writing ability is amazing. this poem expresses so much emotion and it's just amazing. 5/5 and keep it up =) |