Eyes In My Attic

by Lu   May 1, 2006


The door to my attic
positioned way up high
every time I look at it
I'm sure about to cry

every night it moves a little
I swear two eyes are peering out
cowering beneath my blankets
I'm to afraid to shout

I take one more little peak
those eyes are staring back
my limbs frozen paralyzed
I think I'm having a heart attack

jump out of my bed real quick
my legs just like jello
uncaring that my new Pj's
are stained a bright,bright yellow

leap into my parents bed
wake them, don't I dare
my Pj's now feeling wet and cold
yet I don't really care

I think I am safe now
but only for just one second
my dad is now awake
he'll be angry I do reckon

back to my bed for me
dad leading me by the hand
there are eyes in the ceiling
you just don't understand

enough of this silly nonsense
say he, as he tucks me in my bed
my last resort I hold my breath
until my face turns bright,bright red

there is no time to waste
I need my way real fast
I turn a shade of purple
getting his attention at long last

he shakes me and shakes me
nearly turns me upside down
if my friends could only see me now
I'd be the laugh of our town

I let my breath out quickly
as dad lays me on the floor
taking one more look
at the eyes in the attic door

dad goes and gets the plywood
nails that door up real tight
mutters quietly to himself
"I just can't take this one more night"

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Lol...Oh Luanne, this is adorable! I really enjoyed it from beginning to end.
    The things parents will do for their children and a good nights rest :)
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    This is just superb. Reminds me of my little girl. She is just starting to have nightmares and strange dreams. She often tells me of the eyes behind the door and the dragon that breathes fire :D

    A very creative piece Leanne, wonderfully done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Luanne,

    You captured a child's worst fears about things that go bump in the night so brilliantly. There was such a creepy feeling in the write. Well done.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This really brought me back to my childhood...I had a closet exactly the same as you have described here.
    Very inspiring to know that as we grow older we can face our fears to become stronger memebers of society!