Pretty enough now ....

by emmajaynexo   May 1, 2006

...Pretty Now?..
girl: hi
boy: umm....hi
girl: i have to tell you something...
boy: what?
girl: i really like you. and i..i think im falling in love with you
boy: okay....
girl: what do you mean 'okay'?
boy: i dont like you like that.....
girl: why not?
boy: i cant tell you...maybe another time
from then on, the girl kept asking the boy 'why not?' whenever she saw him, and he kept answering the same answer of ' i'll tell u later' finally the girl got fed up.
girl: im tired of this! tell me why you dont like me!
boy: do you really wanna know why?
girl: yes!
boy: its because you're not pretty! whats the point of going out with someone when they're not pretty?!
girl: but...i....
boy: just shut up and leave me alone!
the boy leaves and the girl is sittin there alone, crying her heart out. then her cell phone rings
girl: hello?
mum: sweetheart? i want you to go home, ok? i'll be home from work in a few hours
girl: alright mum
mum: i love you
girl: i love you too, mum
mum: bye bye
girl: bye
the girl heads home and once she got there, she went in the bathroom and looked at herself in the mirror
girl: im not pretty enough.....
she set to work, knowin fully well wat she was goin to do. 2 hours later, her mum came home and heard the bath water running. she went upstairs to find the hallway flooded so she knocked on the door.
mum: honey? are you alright?
she opened the door and was shocked at the sight. the bath was overflowing onto the floor and the water was tinted red. she walked over to see wat was inside and screamed. there, her little girl was lyin with cuts all over her face and wrists. her mum backed away and was goin to run to call the police wen something caught her eye. on the mirror, a piece of paper was taped up
" am i pretty enough now? "......

a persons aperarance doesnst matter. what matters is their heart and personality. no one wants to be told they're not good you?


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Latest Comments

  • 12 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Good work. This reminds me of a poem I wrote called "Beautiful Now" anyways keep up the great work. Shanik

  • 15 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Wow! The message in this poem was very important, girl! Great you put these ideas down! Beauty doesnt matter at all, what really does is our personality, ourselves! We are all unique and nobody has the right to say they dont want to be with us because of our appearance, we never know what will happen in the future or what may happen to the looks! I loved your poem! I totally agree with you, keep it up!
    Best wishes,


  • 15 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, I thought this poem was really different. Very creative. Nice job.

  • 15 years ago

    by ShaunaMarie

    I like you're poem, it's very good, and it has a good point. I have already been told I'm not good enough, so I know how it feels. take care, XxImNotDeadxX