I am...

by RachelAnne   May 3, 2006


I am wind,
I am Fire,
I have sinned,
I am no Liar

I have wings,
I have love,
I can sing,
I look above

I take heart,
I take soul,
I am smart,
I am dull

I live like this,
I live like that,
I look to miss,
I look straight at

I share feelings,
I share goals,
I take meanings,
I take roles

I tell you where,
I tell you how,
I listen fair,
I listen now

I tell you honesty,
I tell you lie,
I feel you promise to me,
I feel you die

I see you strong,
I see you weak,
I hear your song,
I hear you're meak

I laugh,
I cry,
I make,
I take

I see me fly,
I see me dance,
I saw me die,
I saw my chance

-Rachel (c)

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by lana

    I love this poem

    Its great
    10/10 if i could

    5/5

    lana

  • 17 years ago

    by brkendown

    Its good but i think it could use some more details, just to bring it to life!
    Ashley 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Moose

    For me it was TOO repetitive, reading every line and seeing I, I, I, I, kinda took the spunk out of the poem. ANd also the flow was a little off. You could tell you had a lot of good ideas when you were writing this, but It doesnt seem like you finished them out. 4/5

    Not as good as your other poems. But still not the worst thing I've ever read. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Imogen

    I love this poem. its really clever. the lines are short but they convey a lot of meaning. 5/5 and you're on my faves!

    imi

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    I liked it. But if it was me. I would have ended it in a sad way. like your last stanza.
    I see me fly,
    I see me dance,
    I saw me die,
    I saw my chance

    I would have made it
    I see me dance
    I see me fly,
    I saw my chance,
    I saw me die

    But that's just me. Anyway. i like it. 5/5

Read All Comments (8)

More Poems By RachelAnne