HER

by Corruption   May 4, 2006


Her eyes are like the stars in the night
they shine brighter then the sun itself
she has the essence of all good
she is perfect, pure goodness

from the first time we talked I knew she was perfect
we talked for hours about each other and never got tired
when she is away I can almost picture her perfectly
though there are certain parts where it is to beautiful to describe

I hate the absence that I feel when I am not with her
she completes me makes me whole
her aura is magical
her words are kind nice and always flattering

I think of her in class at bedtime
any time anyone say beauty I think of her
I read a love poem I think of her
I watch tv and I picture her right on the screen

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  • 17 years ago

    by simply crissyboo

    This poem is so sweet, but in all honesty...i don't think the eding as any sense of closure, like, after the last line, you could put something like..."and i know, she is all i need in this world." you don't have to use tht, but if you added just somehing to end it, it would be way better that it already is. but i think it is a really lovely poem. good job!
    xo~crissy

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Awww thats sooo sweet! check out some of mine please. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by stephanie

    WOW i like this poem lol i just met you in the chat room

  • 18 years ago

    by Cristela Quiroz

    I like it, its so sweet!