Life At These Speeds

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   May 4, 2006


Memories fade into the distant past,
As her feet pound the warm asphalt.
Angry voices become faint whispers,
As she runs under the sun's warm rays.

Sweat glistens on her back,
Her feet echo in the peacefulness, music.
The rythmn of her heart fills her head,
As she concentrates on her pace.

She looks at the familiar surroundings,
Contemplating the beautiful scenery.
What had become so dull, so unfamiliar,
Finally found its breathtaking beauty.

Sun blaring at her back, peaceful.
Absorbing the scene's beauty,
She continues to set her pace,
Loving life at these speeds.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Empty Space

    Wonderful! I really love your work!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Beautiful, you really do have a way with words that makes almost everything you write seem magical. Your definatly going to be the neweset addition to my favorites. Thanx for sharing your poetry with us all. ANd your so right, sometimes when you go so fast everything out there seems to be blurred, Wonderful.

  • 17 years ago

    by Scaleeski

    Absolutely stunning. I like the part

    "What had become so dull, so unfamiliar,
    Finally found its breathtaking beauty."
    Probably one of the best two lines, ever.
    Thanks so much for your comment and everything.

  • 17 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    This poem is amazing, and the words you chose are absolutely beautiful. You're one of my favorites. Keep up the great writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Ooooh... I really like this... I haven't talked to you in a while, but your writing is as good as ever. Keep it up, let me know how you're doing! Mwah!
    Car

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