This poem flowed very nicely, and explored many emotions of serious issues.. I love it

This was a really great poem. I hope it's not true either, if it is i'm so sorry, but either was this was an amazing poem! It flowed very nicely.

Awesome poem.. Very heartfelt and tugs at your heartstrings and yet its so sad. I like how you were brief about the abuse and went straight to the main topic.. I loved it! Great work!

--emotionless.19*

Though sad, but beautiful penned, yet flowed so well with every stanza, beautiful done.

bert.

Omg.. that is so sad, yet so beautiful.. if that is happening to you (plz say itz not) get rid of him, no matter how much you love someone you should not let ANY1 do that to you! newayz.. keep up the gr8 work!
jessy

U hv just potrayed the brutality mens do on womens and i myself hate this ugly macho part.
but u know what, nowdays i see the other way around... :o)

great write in the end
all the best and take care
5/5

Omg this poem is incredible!! I absolutely love it! great job!

Lauren,

I loved how you kept it simple. There's so much more you could've included, but they're only the obvious and it lets me think to myself what's going on here.

Keep it up!
-colin.//

Lauren!
i love all your poems! they are so good. i guess i love them so much because i feel i can relate to them. your such a good writer, you can tell there is so much more going through your mind
keep writing!
5/5

♥ Kirstie

It was great, your an excellient writer well done :)

I really liked this poem...it really means something.
i don;t know you, really, but i think youve got talent.

@...Hey nice poem...i just though i'd read one of yours since u posted on my posts and i was curious...rock on..:P...and about the poem again....i think it really full of that extra sumthing:)...@

THAT IS FRICKEN INTENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!! i want to beat the crap out of that guy so bad...ooooommmmmmmmmggggggggggggggggggggg

By the way...5/5 and you never talk to me!!!! i have an email adress!!!!

Lol thanx for the comment but ur more talented then me

if u want to talk (for fun) here is my email
BoOkGrl13@aol.com

everything is is letters except for the last two
u can jsut copy and paste it

Hey i love this poem, i could relate to it.it was very well writen, i give you a 5/5
thanx for the comment!

Kristinax0x

Hey I'm Amy ... I love your poems and I was wondering if you would mind me using them on my website ... The website will be dedicated to you so I'm not stealing your poems =). E-mail me: Flufffydog@aol.com to let me know =) xxx

Hey, its Amy again.
The website doesn't just credit yu ... Its all about yu! I've finished it for the time being so check it out www.-laurenlove.piczo.com and if yu like it i can keep it up and running =).
xxx

I felt the emotion tho for me its all anger my friend she went thru this :((
its a good poem 5/5

You poem is amazing i love it!
shelby xox