GOSH!!!!! your poem absolutely ROX!!!!!!
I loved the last stanza the most!
its so wonderfully written..so much emotions inside!
you're such a wonderful gift..for the one that you love =)
Keep up the excellent work
This poem showed good emotion. I could envision the mood and the way you descibed your words in my mind. You have a great talent, and you should keep writing.
Also, if you have time, please comment on my poems, anyone's you feel like. I would also like to have the comments, votes, and criticism of greats poets like you. So if you have a spare moment, please check them out. Thanx
But in the mean time, please keep writing, you have a gift.
Hey there.....it seems i hv read this one before somewhere... :o))
as i told u...this one is really beautiful and now other great personalities has proven me right too...so keep on trusting me.
this poem is so much full of love and hope spl this stanza: -
We delighted in the joy and we tasted the pain
We had many days of sunshine and a few drizzles of rain
We rise and fall but through it all
My love for you will still remain
overall this is really a fantastic poem...just loved it.
Your poems are so great. I enjoy reading everyone of them. Thanks for the comment. yeh it's been a while, since i've been here. nice to be back though. great to be reading your poems again too =p. Hope you were doing well.
Wow this is a absolutely beautiful poem I love it. It really touched me too. A perfect piece if you ask me. It carried the beauty of how love really is, wether its easy or hard.
But of course a 5/5.
Thankyou for your comments
Wow...your pretty much my idol! ur poem is like my life story about this one guy i pretty much loved last year but i never wanted to tell him because i didnt wanna ruin our friendship but ne way your poem was AMAZING and i hope one day i can write a poem as well as you have!!
Keep up the amazing work,