If Only

by Once an Angel   May 9, 2006


If only the sky was purple,
Instead of its sad old blue.
If only we could wear socks,
Uncovered by sweaty shoes.

If only we could live forever,
And then just a little bit more.
If only we could heal heartache,
And stop muscles from being sore.

If only we could change the world,
And put its pieces back together.
If only we could be sure of life,
So "if only" wouldn't last forever.

I know it is a pretty basic poem, but it has a really good message, so I wanted to post it. I was impacted upon re-reading it because I just wrote it for a thread of mini poems.

-Tainted

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  • 17 years ago

    by callmecrazy

    Wow this poem does have a great mess. i really liked it

    If only we could change the world,
    And put its pieces back together.
    i liked that part the most.
    i wish i could change the world to make it better

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    Well, short or not..i loved it, it did have a great message...I will try to use it to help myself!!! great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Little Dot

    I really liked this poem. If only, people were happy enough with what they had and who they are. Good message.

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Yes! I liked this one alot. Very short and basic. But you were right, it has a great message to it. I really liked the first two lines. They stood out alot to me. Keep it up =) 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awwww.. i LOVED that! it was so adorablle.. and your right, such a great message.. this was definetely a 5/5! i really enjoyed reading that.. it made me smile! nice write!

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