Tell Me What You Think...

by Strange Angel   May 11, 2006


Open up my skull
And look into my head
See the thoughts
So muddled and confused...
Sit yourself alone there
I'll give you time to think

But I need you to tell me:
What is it that you see there?

Because thoughts stray like lonely leaves
Down streets, long and empty.
A thousand memories,
Bright and shining joy
Or fade to grey and die:
A fatalistic warning.

But think into myself
I can't see what is there.
So much just bursting to come out
No real skill or hope.

I just need a second opinion
So come and take a seat,
Explore those lost emotions
And reveal those hidden
Desires, hopes, and dreams.

Open up my skull
And look into my head
Sort through the thoughts
Change, control and order...
Sit alone with me
And tell me what you think.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fig

    Another jaw dropping idea. your such and amazing writer becuase the language you use is soo meaningful and real. unlike most people on this site who have no vocabulary or descriptie skill. AND aswell as that, you come up with these ideas that are soo beautiful they should be cliqued but thier not. becuase no one else has ever thought of them
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Flying Phoenix

    Righty dear. Your poems are getting stranger......

    lOVE THEM THO!!!

    XXXXX

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Pretty :) Really enjoyed reading this, it's so original, pretty obscure too. How did you get the idea? Great stuff though anyway, it flowed really nicely. 5/5 =D x

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