Him

by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ   May 14, 2006


He comes home drunk most every night
Screaming and yelling always wanting to fight
You can see the fiery red veins burst through his eyes
His the one his own children despise

He always accuses them of things that he did
Says he knows he didnt do it for he is not a kid
Every night the kids kneel down and pray
and ask god to please take this man away

A couple of nights ago he came home with a gun
Shot his wife and said that he had just begun
The children bawling and wishing they were dead
Not knowing of what trials could be ahead

He grabbed the oldest and started beating him
The chances of him living were extremely slim
Right about that time there was a knock on the door
Said this abuse was over there will be no more

The man was taking by the police
Now the children will always live in peace
Nobodys sure who made the call
Maybe a miracle, maybe not at all

The children moved in with their moms brother
For he will be the replace of their mother

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  • 17 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Omg...this is so sad! did this happen to you...if it did i am SO sorry...i mean...even though my dad is a drunk...he doesn't hit me a lot...at least not for a long time...of course...that could be because i don't hang around him...anyways...excellent poem...it truly touched my heart...masterful details and imagery...it swept me up with the first lines...i loved it...5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    Thats So Sad!...I Hope This Poem Isn't True...I Wrote a Poem Similar To This About Murder But Its Not Good As Yours...I Think That Its Really Awful How Murder Has Become a Common Crime In This World...Keep Writing It Becomes You *Winking*
    Talent Never Dies When Your Born With It 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Wow---im speechless-That is so sad and so well written. There are a couple grammatical errors, but nothing big. Great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Russell

    Very very nicely writen.It flows pretty well..a lil choppy at places but good.It also has a story to tell which is always good.Also,nice use of words in this poem as well.You're a very talented poet..Keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by PS

    Oh this is sooo sad. def well written there are tears in my eyes.

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