Awww huniiiiiii!
you always come up with new beautiful ideas!
the poem was really beautiful just like the way you are XD
its so lovely written and I loved the way you wrote it!
I luv you huni more than you'll ever know!!!!!!!!
NemO x0x0x0x0x0x0x

Wow..this is amazing. graphic and sad, but it sent chills up my spine. like all of your poems do! i love it. and you : ) keep your head up.

Wow once again it is just amazing. everytime i read one of ur poems i am just amazed. and your english is so good. keep it up. you've got some true talent.

Awww lovely poem hunnie. i haven written in a while, i only have one recent one. well done
Rosie xXx

Mona darling...!
So sad....but I love it as always...!
Short & Simple yet says so much...I hope you're okay...lots of love
-xxxxxxx-

Great, absolutely breathtaking. Its quiet unique and I loved it. A beautiful girl like you shouldnt feel this way, so I hope this poem is not about you. You truely have talent, so never stop writing. And thanks for your sweet words on mine. I really appreciate it.

Best Wishes Always

Great Imagery & Use Of Descriptive Words, I Admire Your Style & I'm One Of Your Fans 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

This is amazing. It's so sad, but at the same time, it seems like you're not the victim, awesome job.

I really like the flow of it and how descriptive it was..and everything. Nice job!

Also, I like the 3-line stanza.

Not something you see often.

Powerful, haunting, and sad! Excellent choice of words and nice imagery! Awesome writing here...

I really enjoyed this poem although there were some parts that the flow was a lil off it was still very good...Joc

Wow that was awsome maybe u can read one of my poem thats catchy didnt make a sound

It's not one of the best poems. I liked it, but it wasn't that good. it didn't really make sense. And the semi collens only made it more confusing.

Oh my god.
i am so sorry i cant say anything more descriptive but i think you're poem just took the awe out of me. (haha i was about to say took the awe out of awesome:P ) god im a loser:P)
Anyway! you've caught me in a happy mood so this shall be a different comment:P

It's really a breath taking poem. So descriptive, i watched it happen.
hmm..wow!
I hope you're ok.

Ive missed u
love lots xoxoxo

Wonderful job.....the pain can b felt here......5/5

luv

EXCELLENT WORK.
5/5

WOW! I loved this. It captivated me! This is really good. Damn. This is VERY GOOD!

I espcially loved this stanza:
Stab me with your sharpest knife
I will let my blood freely fly around
And I promise not to make a sound

Keep up the good work! **5/5**
LOVE
Lolli.xx

Wow, really good poem, i loved this. It worked so well and read well throughout. 5/5

Charl xoxoxox

Great job keep up the good work i love this poem. 5/5

Nice poem written really well keep up the good work. live the theme of the poem 5.5

Wow......i love this!!!! its really good!!!