Please Grant Me This Wish

Wow. you truly are a very talented writer! this poem was a great idea and had a lot of thought put into it with each stanza! i love how you keep repeating the title of the poem, it really adds affect! nice job! 5/5

Sands of promise
bury my past mistakes
make me a better person
please grant me this wish

these lines are really beautiful.

Luanne Luanne Luanne
Im breathless it was such a beautiful yeah heart wrenching honest and raw piece of poetry...not only did I relate to it, I think like it, Only Im unable to put it so gracefully eloquent as you have with your words here...another spectacular write darling bravo!
Eirisa xoxo

Very nice! I like how you twisted elements of nature with each wish, something I never would've thought of.
The last stanza is brilliant, my favorite in this piece. Take care and keep it up~Holly

Luanne, this is so beautiful!

"Mountains of strength
teach us to stand tall
speak out for those unable
please grant me this wish"
^^^ This is my favorite stanza!
Really inspiring and beautiful write.. :)