by ŦÅüċhÌήğ ỀνĬĽ May 19, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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I thought I could change the words on your lips |
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Wow great poem. this was amazing!!! i loved ur descriptions, and ur rhymes. very unique. the last line was my favorite. |
by StephanieH
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Wow, very touching poem, and very well written, you did an excellent job, keep up the good work, comment mine thank you! |
by ECILA ice
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This is a great poem.Honestly speaking i rarely write comments to anyone but since i had read your poem its really amazing... It jive and rhyme perfectly KEEP IT UP!! |
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The wording is excelent u r amazing |
by ♥ Niina
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Wow..i reallii liked thiis poem..ii can defiinetly relate to iit..great job |