Waiting..

by Jessica   May 20, 2006


My love for you
Will never fade
It lingers around
My broken heart
Waiting for you
To come back..

My memories
Float and twirl
Around my
Heartbroken mind
Waiting..

I want to once again
Feel your delicate lips on mine
Listen to your soft voice
Stroke your shiny hair
And be with you..

I miss you..
There is nothing else
I can say..

Every night in my dreams
I dream of you..
And when I eventually wake
And realize it was all a dream
Just a dream that will
Never come true.

I cry and cry..
Cry until all my sadness
Seems to evaporate
Into thin air..

And then I continue
To wait for you..
Because I love you
And I will always
Be waiting..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Meggie33

    Oops my bad.. ^^^^8 words lol....

    **meggie**

  • 17 years ago

    by Meggie33

    Oops my bad.. ^^^^8 words lol....

    **meggie**

  • 17 years ago

    by Meggie33

    Okay here are 7 words to describe that poem & the way it made me feel while i was reading it.. alright? okay here goes:::

    *amazing
    *speechless
    *creative
    *original
    *unique
    *unreal
    *wonderful
    *rhythm

    ***I really, really enjoyed reading this poem***

    **meggie**

  • 17 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very expressive peice with some good descriptions and well portrayed concepts.

    "I dream of you
    And when I wake
    And realize it was all a dream"
    ^this part seems slightly weaker than the rest of the peice, but it quickly recovers again in the next stanza and doesn't take much away from the overall peice.