The Four Elements..

by Jessica   May 21, 2006


As the meandering stream
Runs by
All that is heard
Is the sound of running water
It swooshes and glides
It splashes and sparkles
And then continues on its way..

The powerful fire
Makes everyone fear it
It slashes and explodes
The colors so bright
They temporarily blind you
It rips and destroys
Everything in its way
And then it finally dies down
And leaves all its waste
Behind..

As you step over beautiful flowers
Gaze up at giant trees
Lay in the gorgeous grass
Think about
Why they are all there..
Because of our precious earth
We have all of nature
It was all created because
Of our earth..

The air swirls,
Blows and calls
The air has many emotions
It flutters around everything
Blowing when angry
Silent when sad
Breezy when happy
It never stays in one spot
The air is always moving
It is never still..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenna Balkin

    Great ending!
    I really love this poem! It gave me goosebump!!
    *thumbs up!*

    Jen

    Comment#10

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was awesome. Sounded so pretty tehe. The last stanza was brillant. A really great poem here. Keep it up. 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Ooh beautiful descriptions and impressive use of adjectives. I liked how you described the water best, I could hear it trickling by. A good nature write, well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lying To Live

    Glad to read a great poem that doesnt bring a tear to my eye ....good wrok keep it up ... espeically the ones like this its great ....

    XoX *~CrImSon__TeArS~*

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey this is really an amazing piece of art, i just liked it all the way, lot of thinking is been behind every single word here & the beauty has been potrayed beautifully

    all the best and take care
    5/5