An ache within the heart

by Sarah   May 21, 2006


My heart is slowly breaking
Everybodys faking
These drugs I wont stop taking
Until this pain stops aching

This throb controls my world
Beats hard enough to kill
Your love just fits the bill
Dont stop else i'll get ill

A monster in the making
Ive given up on dating
Whats with all the rating
The never ending hating

My mind is in a whirl
He knows im just a girl
The anger lets lips curl
His touch just makes me hurl

I dont understand the concept
Im debating whether to accept
The love he gives is wrong, yet
Inside its safely well kept

My heart is slowly breaking
Everybody's faking
These drugs I keep on taking
Because this pain just wont stop aching

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    I loved this poem, though it's filled with so much saddness and emotion the way you wrote it I loved it. Keep up the amazing work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Aussie

    Cool poem:)
    i like ur taste. the ryhme goes well. keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by KayTOTS

    Aww thats really sad.
    but i like it

    to me, when i was reading it, it seemed like you gave two sides to everything you said... and i like that because i think theres two sides to everything

    and your rhyme was catchy... :]

  • 17 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Nice job i like how the lines rhyme. im trying to make a poem like that havnt had much luck thought keep it up

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